#3
It does sound good, it can be a great song so don't stop working on it.
#4
Not what I was expecting at all. Bar 38 and onward sound like load era metallica. I like the song, very catchy, and something I could see in a movie soundtrack.
#6
thanks

Quote by powerwhee
Bar 38 and onward sound like load era metallica.

coincidentally (or not?) that's my favourite metallica era, although, I never had doing something of the like in mind
#7
For something so unbelievably simple, it really has a strange charm to it. Feels tightly arranged, like you know exactly where you're going with it. Reminds me of the White Stripes, really - the drumming style, plus the riffs - particularly at the start. Starts to stray from that feel into the already mentioned Metallica style. So, it's quite pleasant - nicely constructed so far, and no obvious flaws. Make sure you finish it.