#3
As I'm listening:

I really like the guitar work. Nice tone and phrasing. I think the kick drum needs a little work, maybe EQ and compression it so it has a little more low end to it, it will help make the track more powerful IMO. Overall, good job, keep up the good work.

Crit mine if you have a chance: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1187051
#4
thanks a lot, weren't any drums involved in this..those were samples, which i used from the recording software that I used. I think they fit pretty well, though the guitar is intended to be in the foreground.

For me this is not a complete song!
If it was, the drums would be a different, the bassline would a bit more complex and some vokals would be there too (but i'm not a drummer, bassist or a singer)
Those are just some ideas that could end up as a song when I get into the right band with the right people.