#1
'Beneath The Deep' in my profile, it's got an ambient ocean sound (whale chirps, rolling tide) Thankf for any crits!

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#2
Hard to say anything It was...ummm very atmospherical. Maybe build up some melodies?
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Schecter Hellraiser C-1
ENGL Thunder 50 E322
Blackstar HT-50
Framus 2x12 Cab
Yamaha HS50M


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#3
Thanks. I thought about that but I didn't end up doing it. It's actually more of just having fun making whale sounds on a guitar.
#6
cool song man. i thought it was a bit empty and long though. cool whale type noises ect, and that was some good strippy guitar playing. i liked at 349 i think it was when it started getting faster and faster. it needs to be trimmed a little bit, and maybe have some other elements added. but not bad.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1192656