'Beneath The Deep' in my profile, it's got an ambient ocean sound (whale chirps, rolling tide) Thankf for any crits!

Hard to say anything It was...ummm very atmospherical. Maybe build up some melodies?

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Thanks. I thought about that but I didn't end up doing it. It's actually more of just having fun making whale sounds on a guitar.
cool song man. i thought it was a bit empty and long though. cool whale type noises ect, and that was some good strippy guitar playing. i liked at 349 i think it was when it started getting faster and faster. it needs to be trimmed a little bit, and maybe have some other elements added. but not bad.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1192656