cool, but just like he said, it get repetitive and that is at 1:03, i think at this point another melody should come in, then later u can come back to the first one...
solo is good, it fits the mood
i liked the outro
i didnt like much the bass guitar, i think there was some notes off scale, not sure though!

build more on this one, im sure it will turn out to be a great song...

crit mine?