#2
Sounds very fusion-y to me, I like it. The use of harmonies was nice to give it that exotic feel. I kind of thing cynic based vocals over this, but that's just me lol. As for parts to change: spice up the bell in the second break a bit. Do that to really bring this part out.

I wasn't a big fan of the bends in the solo. I feel that while, yes, you stopped to "talk a little" as opposed to straight shredding, you didn't say much. Spice it up with little po/hos during the bends, maybe a melody. It's be a worlds difference.

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#3
Loving the verse riff (w/o the synths/overdubs), good chord progression, its catchy!

Pre chorus, its a little confusing b/c of all that is going on (guitar pro can be a pain in the ass for that). I liked the harmonies though.

Chorus, w/o lyrics to go w/ it I'm just not feeling the chorus, the time sig change was a nice touch but the synth/keys are too powerful here

Bridge (Bar 65) + Break = **** yea! My fav part of this song, very demons and wizard-ish

the bridge that follows (bar 81) was a nice touch too, like the drums there and the bass plays a huge part there too, completely changes the mood when the bass line changes, i like it =D

Solo, I liked the intro to it (bar 113-124), after that it kind of died off, perhaps change it a bit (I hear syncopation in my head when I listen to that part for the solo, add in some weird note durations and unison bends arch enemy style).

Overall a solid piece, I give it a 7.5/10. Keep it up and thanks for the crit!
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