I have no idea where to go after that.
Lol looks like you coverd everything! lol Really good song BTW. Ummmm Mayby revive an old motif in a diffrent key?
Pretty good so far. I suggest if you're going for core, do a breakdown (but not just chuggy chuggs oh please). Then after loop it back to your "main riff" and continue the process, assuming your song has some sort of structure :P
First of all i want to say that i HATE metalcore but actually this is more like ''Göteborg style death'' or what they call it (In Flames, Soilwork and some other bands). And this was a nice song!