#1
#2
Alright, I checked out "Michigan".
The mixing is good. I like the 2 rhythm guitar tracks. The chord progression is alright, nothing really special, but it fits with the song as a whole. The lead parts are solid, nice soloing.
Overall it's a pretty nice track
c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1192017
If man is 5, if man is 5, if man is 5,
then the Devil is 6, then the Devil is 6, then the Devil is 6, the Devil is 6,
And if the Devil is 6,

then God is 7, then God is 7, then God is 7
This monkey's gone to heaven.
#3
Wow. Michigan rocks! You're great! I can so see someone like Brent Smith or some other alt rock singer doing this. Once again, good job!
#4
wow man. im impressed. i realy liked rain. great playing. it realy set the mood and reminded me of early zeppelin stuff. an almost haunting feel. its short, and it a cool instermental. i think you could do more though, make a chorus/breaking climax part or some kind of change up. then exstend it to like 3 min or something. its good how it is though. i was just wishing it was longer. good job.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21436804#post21436804
#5
Listened to crosing the surface. loved it lots. i thought it could have built up more tension though. it sort of stayed the same through out the entire piece. I love the feel to the song also. great vibe going on.

i also listened to intense hoping it would be a little more intense. it was a little more intense but i absolutely loved the harmonies between the solo and the rhythm and also how the rhythms of both of them complimented each other. great track.

I have a few songs in my profile if you want to listen to one or two of em. also have a thread for my newest song: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1192190