How old are you?

Not bad, just work on your timing and feel.

By feel I mean don't look and act so stiff while playing. Get into it, Mr. Crowley is a 'pump you up' song (At least for me it is) and should get you to really 'feel' your playing. Get into it, don't make playing look like it's a chore.
PRS SE Custom 22
Peavey Vypyr 30

"When you look into the eyes of a man grown old,
wonder about the secrets gone untold.

When you look into the eyes of a young child,
marvel at the innocence running wild."