Overall it was good, you know the song but have a few timing/accuracy issues. You should definitely play along with the song to get the timing right, I'm pretty sure that you were playing it a bit too fast. There was the occasional flubbed note as well, just a by-product of not truly knowing the song yet, also meaning you need to feel the song more to increase the fluidity. That usually doesn't happen until you basically have the song nailed though.

Practice up your accuracy and timing and post another vid, I'm sure it'll be great.
Yeah. I hear you. I definitely have a timing issue. I finish the song almost 30 seconds before he does. I've yet to play it with the song fully since I didn't tab it quite right.

I will work on a better one and post that up... Eventually