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I've been writing some stuff the past couple of months for an acoustic CD I'm working on, this is one of the first songs I wrote. Let me know what you guys think, C4C! Cheers.

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And then daylight broke,
It shone so bright,
The spirit in her eyes,
that glow in her mane,
The essence was so mellow,
We both laughed in disdain

If I could, halt those hands,
Grab my comfort, my pain,
And that one last glance,
Freedom, in her soul,
It's the little things you did,
the little things you did,
the little things you did..

Her smile, all above me,
Taking over my mind,
Sorrow, in this reality,
Her shame was my crime

When we held hands,
we found that key,
When we held hands we found that key,
We found that key,
You're past that door,
You're past that door but you're without me..

If I could, halt those hands,
Grab my comfort, my pain,
And that one last glance,
Freedom in her soul,
It's the little things you did,
the little things you did,
the little things you did..

It was the spirit..in her eyes.

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Cheers guys, CRIT 4 CRIT!
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