#1
hey guys (and gals) Just got a new song up "untitled 5" Lemme know what you think.


Any techinical questions just let me know.

as always C4C


http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Bostonrocks/music/all/play675299
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#2
nice song,i just dont know what to think of it ,the production is good, there are no mistakes ,buts it's pretty repetetive with the same chords going over and over again,the solo is nice too,but nothing cought my attention

guess it's just not my cup of tear ,good job overall


crit mine ?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1192992

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1192996
Wolv
#3
Thanks. I'll check em out
Quote by gregs1020
Brett has been saving for a splawn for 4 years
countries have been toppled in the time it's taking, revolutions won got a black pres

yawn


Quote by bubb_tubbs
When he finally gets one it'll probably be televised like the Berlin Wall coming down.
The end of an era
#5
nice song!parts of it kind of reminds me of dokken.the only part that kind of bothers me is at 37 seconds in where the guitar cuts off abruptly. maybe you coould have possibly faded it out better but its no a huge deal.it is a bit repeditive but what band doesnt have repeditive songs?the solo was nice , i also like the beggining solo also.over all i would give you a 8/10.


crit mine if you have a minute

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1193957
Last edited by beyondthegrave at Sep 2, 2009,
#6
Haha Beyond the grave it right, it kinda has that Dokken vibe. Which is pretty cool. Repetition isn't that bad a thing. "Breaking The Chains" by Dokken doesn't have much variety, but it's an awesome song, as are a bunch of punk songs. Don't worry about what they are saying. Through some vocals on it and it could be a pretty solid song. 7.5/10

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