#1
You've stolen a mile from the inch I afforded
Just took it and run when the audience applauded
The performance you gave when you took to that stage last night!

You may be a fool but gosh you're a pretty one
You took me for another but my minds the keener
What the devil have you done now
Oh I think it's high time that you sorter your life out

Cast it all away
All the bad things that they 'forced you to say'
When you took to the dancefloor wearing nothing but your desire!

But two shots of dignity later, you're feeling alright!

The carnage subsided, exposing you were the
Only true exponent of dancing so dirty
You gave so much yet took so very little back!

But it's alright the memory won't last or so you convince yourself
It's just a phase soon it will be in the past
but you've got to be sure
So tip yer head back and erase it some more!

Cast it all away
All the bad things that they 'forced you to say'
When you took to the dancefloor wearing nothing but your desire!

But two shots of dignity later, you're feeling alright!


Just a song about girls in clubs I've met n stuff
Have a butchers
#2
Normally, I don't like things that say "you" overly much. But this wasn't that bad. Great job of rhyming, when you chose to do so. For song lyrics, it's a solid piece of writing.
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black