#1
its a metal song and its only guitar at the moment.. i havent written the lyrics yet.
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if you have anything on your profile you want me to check out let me know.i cant listen to music on myspace for some reason.so make sure you only want me to check out stuff on ug.
Last edited by beyondthegrave at Sep 2, 2009,
#2
Well, it is difficult to crit this as a track. It's definitly missing at least drums and bass, not to talk about lyrics or leads.
To sum it up, it's a series of riffs.
So to talk about these riffs, they are good. Well thought and executed.
I didn't like the acoustic parts (has nothing to do with sound). Thought they didn't measure up with the riffs.

Thanks for your crit on my acoustic track.
I have a more metallish one you could crit if you want :
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1166447
#3
Quote by belpat
Well, it is difficult to crit this as a track. It's definitly missing at least drums and bass, not to talk about lyrics or leads.
To sum it up, it's a series of riffs.
So to talk about these riffs, they are good. Well thought and executed.
I didn't like the acoustic parts (has nothing to do with sound). Thought they didn't measure up with the riffs.

Thanks for your crit on my acoustic track.
I have a more metallish one you could crit if you want :
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1166447

lol, I actually loved the acoustic part, just not the leads over it. Your riffs are pretty sweet, I don't know that they really mesh well as a song though, like this guy said. The third and fourth (sorta being the same) fit the best together.

I think this would prolly work better together with drums, bass and vocals. Get some proper sounding transfers between riffs with drum fills or drops/slides, whatever.

I was a little put off by the leads, the seemed sorta atonal. I can tell you can play, but the solos seemed like random notes on top of random notes. I dunno if i missed the key relation or what.

Also the end seemed like a completely diff song thrown on the end. Still a couple sweet riffs in it, lol.

That's all I got I think, thnx for the crit and friend request.
#4
thanks for the crits and compliments on some of the riffs. i agree i need drums and bass in it. i also need to get the lyrics to i written also.the first lead in the song was pretty though out.the rest were thrown together.there is really a key i ued on the solos except slayer style. i could have exectuted some of the riffs and changes a bit better also.i just sat down and was like im gonna record a song and wrote the riffs as i was recordin.