wrote the song like a year ago. put down the rythem guitar/lyrics and the background guitar first try so i apologize for the bad little riffs in between.
Please comments, whether you hate it or like

R.I.P Jerry Garcia (1945)-(1995)

In the winter of '65 we were hungry, just barely alive.

very nice and lots of potential to be a very good song

I would add a bridge and chorus. It's a nice simple riff that got me going.
Thanks for posting.