Like the description said, I did this in two takes and I know my timing and everything's off. Just need some crit for the video in general. You don't really need to point out blatant errors unless you need to.

Thanks guys, and C4C like always.
"What are those wooden things? Chairs?"
"No, they are acoustic instruments."
"Acoustic? What's that? Oh you mean a grampa's guitar?"
"A grampa's guitar? That's for pussies and grampas. I think you know it."