laid back beat, good solo guitar playing. also liked how you mixed it up for the ending. keep it up soundin good.
R.I.P Jerry Garcia (1945)-(1995)

In the winter of '65 we were hungry, just barely alive.

Don't make this heavier. Really. It doesn't need it. Actually, if this track were on Itunes I'd buy it as is. The dub vibe is definitely there, and the electronic beat in the back does wonders. The delay guitar is very well done. I'd also like to point out your excellent recording job and note that the breakdown towards the ending is perfect.

Keep up the good work.