#2
hmmm. that was a sweet song. there is something very historic about it that i like. is that just a guitar youre using at the start? very cool. ejiption sounding. i like at around the 1 min mark when that other guitar comes in. good playing. a haunting kinda mood. i could see this being played live with a fog machine. it was short, but i liked it. i think you should make it longer and build on this although it sounds good now. nice job.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21481066#post21481066
#3
Quote by chasepalmer
hmmm. that was a sweet song. there is something very historic about it that i like. is that just a guitar youre using at the start? very cool. ejiption sounding. i like at around the 1 min mark when that other guitar comes in. good playing. a haunting kinda mood. i could see this being played live with a fog machine. it was short, but i liked it. i think you should make it longer and build on this although it sounds good now. nice job.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21481066#post21481066

the part youre talking about is actually 2 guitars, 1 rhythm and 1 lead. if only i had a fog machine in my bedroom, haha