Hey heres me doing a vocal cover of the song For the Soul of the Savior by Darkest Hour. I've not been doing harsh vocals for very long so I need feedback! What I'm doing right, what I'm doing wrong, what and how I should work on improving and getting my scream lower (I'm a teenager)

I'm sure I nailed the right technique though, because prior to recording this I already screamed like that for about 1 hour and it doesn't hurt a bit, it doesn't even feel sore, my voice is just a little raspy and tired after about 2 hours practising.

Sorry about the sometimes a little off timing, can't always keep up with the breathing :P

Please listen to the end (you can ignore what I'm saying at the end, I'm basically saying the same thing that I say in this post)