#3
Quote by YesterdaysToday
It was OK but it need transitions and it just seemed out of rhythm.

yeah i thought it sound really out of time. but i wanted to post it to see if would be any good if it was correctly done.
#4
needs more of a steady flow has to many random things going on. sometimes less is more. has potential though.
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#5
Quote by sbinlb
needs more of a steady flow has to many random things going on. sometimes less is more. has potential though.
check some of my stuff out in my profile

I listened to 'song 4' . I liked the lead but i think it should sound different from the rhythm track. I didnt care much for the solo at the end. but otherwise i liked the riffs, could use drums vox etc.
#8
Those riffs are sick! I really liked the feel, but if you could fix the timing prolems with the guitar and drums then i think it would be real nice.!

if you could find a min or two to crit mine it would be very appricated!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21504043#post21504043

Thanks in advance ! ^^
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