#1
Bat Mother Found Her Daughter

My mind is crazy
cant let it control me
unsure as a bat mother
who lost her daughter

Must fight it
yea I must fight it
but no one can help me
on my own on this one
don’t care what you think of me anymore

Freedom is poetry, you know
don’t care what you think of me
bat mother found her daughter
still haven’t found your heart
no one can help me
on my own on this one

This is so full of truth
but will I find the truth on me
no one can help
on my own on this one
don’t care what you think of me

Didn't even finish a cigarette
writing this crap
for does who read it
**** you
yeah **** you all

Don’t care what you all think of me
specially you
one, two, three
the end. goodbye
Last edited by herozs at Sep 5, 2009,
#6
Quote by StewieSwan
I think you ended too many lined with the world 'me'.


what other word rhymes better with 'me' than 'me'?
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#9
Quote by herozs
Didn't even finish a cigarette
writing this crap
for does who read it
**** you
yeah **** you all

Sooooooo badass.
#10
I never realized bat mothers went crazy when their daughters left home
Quote by metabolicmaggot
Win. +1 cookie for hide the beer.

#11
You don't care what I think of you, your alone on this one, and you probably use a lot of band-aids.
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#15
*Reported*

And since you asked, I thought it was pretty bad. S&L can give you some good constructive feedback though.
I'm the same as I was when I was six years old
And oh my god I feel so damn old
I don't really feel anything
#16
Quote by herozs

Didn't even finish a cigarette
writing this crap
for does who read it
**** you
yeah **** you all


This reminded me of ICP. And yes, thats a good thing
Goodness gracious me!