#1
Here's a poem I wrote. All in all it's 4 pages long but im just going to post a bit of it. C4C and all that jazz.

Stage lights

I feel so strange,
standing out inside the rain,
the moonlight captures silver shadows,
voices echo from the gallows,
calling for their one true love,
screaming for the Lord above,
but alas it wasn't meant to be,
as the stage lights set a sickly scene,
capturing all our hopes and dreams,
twisting them to seem obscene.
In diesem Herz hab ich die Macht.

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#2
i like it

i especially like the

the moonlight captures silver shadows,
voices echo from the gallows,


it seems to flow the best

idont think Alas it wasn't meant to be flowed very well
but i dont know what to put to change it

hmmm... Really good though


Alas