#1
it would be cool to get some constructive feed back. Thanks you!


Let it run.

hes ready hes stoked
into the woods he goes
what he'll find today
he doesn't yet know
whatever happens to be
within his is sights reach
hes ready hes stoked
into the woods he goes
to blow of some steam
gets down lays still on the ground
he sees something move
he makes not a sound
he shoots his gun yeah shoots his gun
it had no time to run
before the metal bullet
pierces its scull
didn't have time to get away
lying there with its pain
waits for the the hunter to approach
he shoots his gun, yeah shoots his gun
the dying tortured animal
is his fun
the blood trickles unto the grass
such a beautiful deep gash
it seeps from its head
he skillfully examines
as he bends down to pick it up
Those same hands
they put his daughters to bed
they hold his love
and know they hold
a dying creature up above
so he can see its life
drain before his eyes
he leaves the lifeless body
to rot on the cold earth
for all that it is worth
before he moves unto the next one
because one is not enough
no he needs more
this time he will let it run
before he takes its life
let it believe it has
a chance to survive
he shoots his gun, shoots his gun
oh he feels so alive

-f
If they've had to use their weapons?? use their weapons? Let me tell you something they signed up to use their weapons. There is no one more bull shit then a cop....Except for a cop on TV.
Last edited by mymymy12 at Sep 5, 2009,
#2
It's good. And it would work as a song. But some parts are out of timing and I don't get.
#3
Thanks! My guitar skills arent really at the place they should be to make a song that doesnt consist of more then a few simple chords so i dont think i should try that XD Thanks for the feed back!
If they've had to use their weapons?? use their weapons? Let me tell you something they signed up to use their weapons. There is no one more bull shit then a cop....Except for a cop on TV.