#1
Been quite busy recently with starting up a new band so this is what ive managed to cobble together this evening to get some ideas down on record. Hit a bit of a snag when my mic just stopped working halfway through recording, so ive got about half a song written

anyway just want some opinions on what ive got so far

and as always ill crit back
#2
Pertty nice, you got some skill I'll give you that, shame that your mic died, I would of liked to hear the rest of the song. The only crit I have for you is that your tone is a bit thin, but thats a mixing issue, mabey beef it up a bit. Good job, cant wait for the rest.

Take a look at mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1195380
#4
i love it! reminds me a bit of megadeth, and the harmonies really bring out the leads. when you finish it, i think a nice melodic breakdown may be just the thing to really make it shine, well done!