#1
This is a song i wrote a while ago, its more of an acoustic song rather than electric. its called Stuck in the Sand
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Verse: 1
It feels like i'm stuck in the sand
maybe it will wash away
i never get a good hand
so maybe i will pull a straight
its startin to seem like all the queens
are pairing up with the kings
your average jack like me
isn't getting anything

Chorus:
I'm just a seashell in the sand
waitin to be in your hand
i'll sing the ocean in your ear
as long as you don't leave me here

we can watch the trees sway
and the big blue tidal waves
there's other shells on the shore
i'm the one you're looking for

Verse 2:
It feels like i'm fallin behind
maybe they're just moving fast
you know i can't rewind
so maybe i'll forget the past
the waves are gettin bigger
i really hope my ship don't sink
i really think i like her
that's probably not what she thinks

Chorus:
I'm just a seashell in the sand
waitin to be in your hand
i'll sing the ocean in your ear
as long as you don't leave me here

we can watch the trees sway
and the big blue tidal waves
there's other shells on the shore
i'm the one you're looking for

Verse 3:
the crabs are doing their sideways dance
i'm still trying to take a chance
waves are pulling me out to sea
i hope someone will save me

i'm sendin out my S.O.S
can't you see i'm in distress?
if i play my cards right
baby i will be alright

i will live happily
when i know shes for me
when the push comes to shove
all you really need is love

all you really need is love* *(repeating this line is just optional when i sing it)

Chorus:
I'm just a seashell in the sand
waitin to be in your hand
i'll sing the ocean in your ear
as long as you don't leave me here

we can watch the trees sway
and the big blue tidal waves
there's other shells on the shore
but i'm the one you're lookin for
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well that's it... lemme know what you guys think
Last edited by motoxninja at Sep 6, 2009,
#2
Verse: 1
It feels like i'm stuck in the sand
maybe it will wash away
i never get a good hand
so maybe i will pull a straight
its startin to seem like all the queens
are pairing up with the kings
your average jack like me
isn't getting anything
This is very nice. I like the poker reference.

Chorus:
I'm just a seashell in the sand
waitin to be in your hand
i'll sing the ocean in your ear
as long as you don't leave me here

we can watch the trees sway
and the big blue tidal waves
there's other shells on the shore
i'm the one you're looking for
Chorus is simple, catchy, meaningful.

Verse 2:
It feels like i'm fallin behind
maybe they're just moving fast
you know i can't rewind
so maybe i'll forget the past
the waves are gettin bigger
i really hope my ship don't sink
i really think i like her
that's probably not what she thinks
What ship? I thought you were a seashell. :O

Chorus:
I'm just a seashell in the sand
waitin to be in your hand
i'll sing the ocean in your ear
as long as you don't leave me here

we can watch the trees sway
and the big blue tidal waves
there's other shells on the shore
i'm the one you're looking for

Verse 3:
the crabs are doing their sideways dance
i'm still trying to take a chance
waves are pulling me out to see
i hope someone will save me
I think you mean out to 'sea'?

i'm sendin out my S.O.S
can't you see i'm in distress?
if i play my cards right
baby i will be alright

i will live happily
when i know shes for me
when the push comes to shove
all you really need is love

all you really need is love* *(repeating this line is just optional when i sing it)

Chorus:
I'm just a seashell in the sand
waitin to be in your hand
i'll sing the ocean in your ear
as long as you don't leave me here

we can watch the trees sway
and the big blue tidal waves
there's other shells on the shore
but i'm the one you're lookin for
<<My lyric. Critique, please?

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