#2
It sounds really cool. The vocals at the beginning are unique to my ears, I've never heard anything quite like it. The drums could use even more tom action and less snare to make it sound heavier. The clean guitar and the fuzzy vocals are a good contrast. I didn't really enjoy the singing much, it could use some more umph. Good start to a song though!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21506397#post21506397

2004 MIM Strat w/ Fender Hot Noiseless pickups
Sovtek MiG 60
Avatar 2x12 w/ Celestion Greenbacks
Snark Tuner
MXR Custom Comp
Fulltone Full-Drive 2
Dunlop JHM3 Univibe
TC electronic Nova Delay
TC electronic Arena Reverb
#3
The need to get alot tighter as a whole. But yes for a work in progress it might work. This type of Metal isnt my cup of tea, so Im not familiar with mixing it. They were thrilled with it. But I explained that I would re-mix it in a few days with fresh ears.
#4
Remixed the tune. And I imagine I will again at some point. Anyway, sounds alot better. Use the link at the top post.
#5
Remixed and added the lyrics.

"BEFORE THE FALL"

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=8062655&q=hi

VISIONS OF LIFE BECOMING CLEAR
NAUSEATING HIGH
LITHIUM FILLS THE ROOM
SPINNING OUT OF CONTROL
THE LACK OF AIR TO BREATHE
PANIC ATTACK INCREASES
WOULD THE OTHER SIDE
COMFORT ME AT ALL
THE RUSH OF THE BLADE PIERCES THE DARK

SEE ME THROUGH THE LIGHT
COME TO MY SALVATION
SALVATION

SANCTUARY FOR THE INSANE
BEFORE THE FALL EVERYTHING SO NUMB
SO COLD AND DARK
HELP ME FIND MY WAY THROUGH THIS
LIVING HELL

I CAN’T BREATE AT ALL
HOPES AND DREAMS ARE CRUSHED
ALONE WITH MY SANITY
TAKE THIS HELL
EVER TO CEASE
NAUSEATING NIGHTMARES
VISIONS OF WHAT ONCE WERE
NEVER MORE TO COME
HERE TO LIVE ALONE
INSIDE WITH ALL OF THIS PAIN

SEE ME THROUGH THE LIGHT
COME TO MY SALVATION
SALVATION

I SEE
TO TAKE A LOST ROAD
THAT HAS LED ME
TO A PLACE OF INDESCRIBABLE PAIN
PAIN PAIN PAIN