hmm. im drunk and that was funny stuff lol. what was the intro haha. i like the strumming pattern and idea of this. i like it. cetchy. guitar and tone sounds good. i think it needs A change or bridge of some kind, just for something diff. that some progression over and over gets a little long. its a short song and i think you need to build off of that basic idea. good stuff. keep it up man.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1194578