#1
Here is some mellow jazz song I made. It's not ready yet. When I'll invite something wonderful I will continue this. Tell me what you like it?
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#3
Umm.... Guitar Pro 5. So you listened the midi file? Its just a file with bunch of computer sounds, so there cant be lyrics.
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#4
It's pleasant, but really not jazzy at all to my ears. It's also painfully incomplete (I know you said that it is, but it's so incomplete it just feels unsubstantial).
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#5
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It's pleasant, but really not jazzy at all to my ears. It's also painfully incomplete (I know you said that it is, but it's so incomplete it just feels unsubstantial).

I agree. The chords are pretty basic . What I would try, is maybe change the arpeggios to a piano and play some chords with the ol' six string twanger that still outline the arpeggios but have more interesting chord tones and make a Melody with the chords.

Then you can use different scales to play over the different chords, because (no offense) but E major isn't the most jazzy scale (although your phrasing was) in the world and I don't find it very interesting.

other than that it sounds great, but, solid start to an idea you can expand on. What I mentioned above was if you wanted to take it in a more jazzy direction, but if you keep going the way you are it will still turn out great i think
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#6
You're right, It isn't so jazzy than I first thought. Don't know why I said so Im gonna keep it like it is
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Schecter Hellraiser C-1
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#7
i agree with daddytwofeet also because when i heard it, it was like, wow, only a minute and a half long??? definitely EXPAND!!!