#1
this is my first try at writing a solo/song, and im hoping its in time and stuff since i dont know any theory or anything...

comments/crit please?
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#2
Well I could teach you how to write a solid solo in like 1 hour of talking over AIM. Do you have AIM?
If not.
How else can I talk to you without spamming the forums? xD

Edit: for a first solo its okay but eh not enough emotion. Simple things can be really emotional or powerful if phrased properly and with the right note choices.
Last edited by mtgold83 at Sep 6, 2009,
#3
yeah i have aim, solidsnake1601, and thanks im gonna work on it some more i think
you brought a hooker to church?
#4
not bad for a first solo, try this one i kept the same style:
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"Our revenge so everlasting sweet,
Enslave your Children, Behead the weak,
Kill every last Man, Woman and Machine
The cleansing has begun.
Your meek defense is foolish,
we come from the stars a trillion strong."
#5
Quote by cptazad
not bad for a first solo, try this one i kept the same style:


thats really kick ass,

i made an updated version of my old solo nao
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solo.gp5
you brought a hooker to church?