Quote by garyd7
I'm not a fan of your tone tbh. That was the first thing I noticed. Maybe spice up the rhythm a bit? It does fit well to the name sorrow but it's not something I'd personally listen to. I'd go over the solo again at the bit were you hit a dead note.

Yeah I hate my tone too,I just cant figure out how to make it better.

Im gonna try make it all sound better later. This was just a demo.

I tried to listen to yours I cant get it to play right now I'll try again later.