#1
Hi everyone! Once again I wrote some new ballad in Schaffer's way. Check it out. It has some sad feelings in it I put down my emotions in there.

Please CRIT IT!
C4C as always
Attachments:
10-Torned Soul.gp4
#2
A little too 'dark saga' like for my taste, but kuddo's anyway, it could've been on that album anyday, but it's better to get inspired by a band and not to actually copy their sound
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#4
Very mellow sounding. Bars 19-20 I didn't like but over time it kinda grew on me. I really like the overall melody but I think you should really spice it up.

As for the end with the clean guitar, change it to jazz aswell. It cuts better and sounds more fitting imo. I suggest mixing the melody up towards to end, little less simplistic.
Mah Rig
Guitars:
BC Rich Mockingbird (X2N)
Schecter Hellraiser (81/85)

Amps:
Peavey 5150 head (Distortion obv)
Avatar 4x12 cab (V30s)
Vox AC30 (Cleans)

Board:
EH Small Clone
ZW Sig Wah (meh)
Boss NS-2