#1
It's short and not the final product. How is this song going so far? I'm working on a chorus. Sorry about the accent.

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#2
I love the way you sing it, it feels so unconventional (but not everyone will like this). Also, your incredibly awesome accent only adds a greater effect to that, you shouldn't need to apologize. Not much I can say about the chord progression, it sounds pretty standard. It's put together well, though, so I wouldn't worry about that. All I can really think of now is that you need a chorus!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1198294
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#3
I like your accent too, it sounds much better.
"and at what time would come up the sun" that little vocal touch is awesome.
The lyrics are great, actually. Very poetical.
The song actually reminds a little bit of the song from pirates of the caribbean!(which is positive)
You should sing in another room, it echoes slightly sometimes.
Great job man, very distinguished voice.

C4C?https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1198994