#1
i have this song forming and so far i have some out lines for my riffs and stuff but i mocked up my intro and thought i'd let you guys check it out to see if i'm wasting my time. it's in my profile and it's called should i carry on ?
c4c's welcome i'll get through asap.
peace
#2
it kicks ass, dude. only problem I have is the high hat on the drums, straight 8ths like that sound better with dynamics, a kind of TACticTACtic feel, you know? not XXXXXXXX, but XxXxXxXx if you get what I mean.

other than that, and a couple of clips, it's awesome.

crit me! crit me!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1192186
Last edited by CoreysMonster at Sep 12, 2009,
#3
Definitely carry on. That was sounding sweet, had me bobbing my head. I had some ideas for it while listening to it, but it's your thing so if you don't want my ideas that's fine. It's got potential, certainly.

I don't have anything for you to crit right now, so this is a free crit.
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#7
Quote by CoreysMonster
it kicks ass, dude. only problem I have is the high hat on the drums, straight 8ths like that sound better with dynamics, a kind of TACticTACtic feel, you know? not XXXXXXXX, but XxXxXxXx if you get what I mean.

other than that, and a couple of clips, it's awesome.

crit me! crit me!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1192186


i see what you mean about the hihats, i defo have more of a dynamic thing going on in the final edit. got a few more riffs to fit in to it.
#8
Quote by Skater901
Definitely carry on. That was sounding sweet, had me bobbing my head. I had some ideas for it while listening to it, but it's your thing so if you don't want my ideas that's fine. It's got potential, certainly.

I don't have anything for you to crit right now, so this is a free crit.


what ideas you got? i ain't that good at ripping the frets.
pm if you want to be in or jam on anything.
#9
I think its worthy to continue, some really cool riffs, but it needs to go into a intro verse, chours etc, kinda way, the recording you had sounded like it was thrown together in a hurry. I dont know what to reccomend, except mabey add a clean intro, then build up into the verse, and then build up into the chours, then settle down into the intro, then build up into the chours again, then do like a major slow breakdown with lots of toms and floor toms and bass drums going. Got carried away, I've always wanted to do a breakdown like Cold did with the song "With my Mind" it sounds so badass, look it up on youtube if you havent heard the song.

Crit mine, its still in the idea stage as well.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21590249#post21590249
#10
Quote by ethan_hanus
I think its worthy to continue, some really cool riffs, but it needs to go into a intro verse, chours etc, kinda way, the recording you had sounded like it was thrown together in a hurry. I dont know what to reccomend, except mabey add a clean intro, then build up into the verse, and then build up into the chours, then settle down into the intro, then build up into the chours again, then do like a major slow breakdown with lots of toms and floor toms and bass drums going. Got carried away, I've always wanted to do a breakdown like Cold did with the song "With my Mind" it sounds so badass, look it up on youtube if you havent heard the song.

Crit mine, its still in the idea stage as well.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21590249#post21590249


yeah this is a mock up did it in about 5 mins. i have a new guitar tone, more of an early metallica bite like on kill em all but a bit more bass response. i have a few riffs to go in which all fit the verse chorus mid 8 that sort of stuff, and theres a good breakdown in there to.
just hope i can get everything to sit together.
and i don't know if i should hold out for someone to sing on it.