this was accidentally placed in the recordings section cus it was like 2:00 in the morning and I didn't think of it...anyway here it is, also i cut out everything after the prechorus due to unsatisfactory. i didnt write the title but the song is all mine. any advice

also if youve already seen this thread under a different title, i deleted it cus i just read the stick title rule and thought it would be more helpful to other members
A Brothers Cry (Heartbeat).gp5
Sorry if the genre upsets you, but my definition of hard rock is basic songs focusing on vocals and my definition of metal is more focused on music than vocals. to me this is metal, i even put "/ Hard Rock" so you guys wouldn't get upset. frankly, i don't care about the genre as long as its good music but that's just me