Well, I wrote this the last few days, was kinda fun
I'm not sure if I should keep the solo in I don't think it's very good..
I watched death proof 3 times in 2 days so lyrics are probably about that movie
Crit for crit, for sure.
edit: changed the solo i little bit and put the chorus+solo in 3/4 and tried some different things on the "playin around the the girls thing" section
Last edited by Crossover- at Sep 13, 2009,
The "just playin' around with the girls" parts are awful, because the rhythm of the vocals is so off. It's like you're trying to do that one little bit in 3/4 and it kills the flow.

Other than that, I quite like it. It's got an interesting feel to it.

Edit - Actually, a few parts sound like they're in 3/4 as opposed to 6/8, particularly the chorus and solo.
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Last edited by DaddyTwoFoot at Sep 12, 2009,
well okay it sounds a bit off but when u really play it it becomes more human, because i sung it when i wrote it so it must be kinda normal, just sounds stupid in gp^^
6/7? there is no rhythm like that u mean 7/8 i guess, well i dont like rhythm changes but i like it when the solo goes its own way if u know what i mean
im gonna crit back tommorrow im too drunk right now
edit: thanks anyway! i forgot that
edit2: ah now i see what u mean.. yeah i will probably have that fixed
Last edited by Crossover- at Sep 13, 2009,