#1
so i've been playing an acoustic for about a half a year, never really ****ed around with electricity. I borrowed my nephews epiphone and amp and jammed for half an hour and came up with this today. I ****ed up a couple pinch harmonics an some other stuff. It's a love song

what should i work on?
is it of any recognizable quality?
i don't ever play for other people, except my ex.
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=63083931
#2
Well, I'm pertty certian it sounded much better to you when you where playing, the quality really sucked, made it sound like you where a 7 year old that just started learning how to play.
which I know your not because I was watching your hands, and your pertty good for having only played for half a year and that being only on acoustic. I would reccomend alot less distortion, and mabey a better mic for recording instead of using a web cam mic, or whatever you used.

I cant really judge the song because I couldent make out what you where playing, sorry man, but if you rerecord it with like a sound recorder program and go and buy like a $30 usb voice mic(like me) and record that way, it should sound much better.

Could you take a look at something I'm working on? I need some help with it.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21590249#post21590249
#3
thanks, i'll try to get a mic, it did sound a lot better to my ear rather than through the computer speakers, i figured screw it though.
what you're working on though, that's friggin sweet, dunno how i can help but it really sounds good
#4
ok first the guitar, well doesn't make a great help, then mmm the song didn't have any sequence for me it was a lame jamming session, i think you should better improove your playing skills, then woryr about writing songs