Wow, i really like the mood of it.
the picking was really atmospheric with the lead backing it up.
but you could experiment more with the bass.
the bass is the element which links rhythm with the melody.
and it's rather odd to use pedal hihat instead of closed hihat.
but it sounds good.
it's incomplete so.. yeah.
that's it. (:

take a look on my song?

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Holy shit nemesis, that was depressing.
Mission accomplished!