#1
Well, today I decided I would try something new. So I tried coming up with a riff with a style that I normally wouldn't go for. It's located in my profile under riff 1.

Critique 4 Critique are welcomed, if you want me to return just specify what and where please. Thank you.
There will be zero tolerance
For the creator of hallowed intentions
There will be zero tolerance
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#3
Thanks for the response!

And yeah, I realize that the tone isn't that great. Someone messed with my pedal and amp earlier today and I didn't feel like fiddling around with it. So I just put on tolerable settings and started playing.
There will be zero tolerance
For the creator of hallowed intentions
There will be zero tolerance
Fate is your deciding God
#5
That amp sucks, theres your tone problem right there.

Not my type of riff, but i think someone could like it
GEAR

Guitars
Danelectro Double Cutaway 1959 reissue, Jay Turser Vintage Series Strat

Pedals
Danelectro Reel Echo, Crybaby Wah, Boss DS-1

Amplifiers
Orange Crush 30w
Fender Pro Junior
#6
Quote by manipulator70
That amp sucks, theres your tone problem right there.

Not my type of riff, but i think someone could like it

I don't think there's a problem with the amp, it's the fact that the night before all my knobs were turned every which way, and the sound I had previously was lost. Therefore, I just threw the knobs around real quick and recorded.
There will be zero tolerance
For the creator of hallowed intentions
There will be zero tolerance
Fate is your deciding God