#2
I really enjoyed your instrumental. I love how you started it with the piano and bass it sounds really nice. I don't think there's anything bad to say about this piece it's just brilliant. Do you play piano in real life?
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Quote by Fearless(Times)
I really enjoyed your instrumental. I love how you started it with the piano and bass it sounds really nice. I don't think there's anything bad to say about this piece it's just brilliant. Do you play piano in real life?



Nope, I want to take it up as a second instrument though, I love the sound of piano.

Thanks for the comment!
#4
it's no problem. i have an updated version of my demo it's the second sendspace link
talk to me
and i better not hear a word
do me baby
i better not feel it girl
i still got one bullet left in my nine
finna do a love crime
love crime
finna do a love crime

lovecrimes -- frank ocean

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#5
This is a really good song.
Love the mega drum fill/solo near the start.
Nice piano lines.
Lead guitar lines are catchy and well composed.

I honestly don't know what I would change.
For that i have to say 10/10
Great job!
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#6
Wow; I'm really impressed. It's really good, in all aspects. It has a solid bassline, a great drumbeat (the crash cymbal gets annoying, but I find that the GP crash cymbals always do, it'll sound better in real life) it has great rhythm from the guitars and piano, and always has a great lead line. I'm especially amazed at parts where you had the bass and one of the guitars doing rhythm, and then the piano and other guitar off doing their own little solos, and yet nothing clashed! Honestly, well done, 10/10.

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#7
Dude... Brilliant. 'Nuff said.
Personally I'm a sucker for Add9 chords, those were perfectly placed. Good use of the Rhodes too. Excellent syncopation in the first drumbeat too. I'd love to hear this recorded.

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#8
I really liked It except for some of the piano leads.
I was really liking the beginning until the mid verse.
It was really good except that the keyboard made it sound to technoey for my liking.
I think it would sound a little better if it got turned down for the rest of the song after the intro.
Otherwise Awesome Song.
Overall? 9.2/10
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#9
To me, it felt like one long endless flow(I know there are different parts).



It started out pretty good like others have said with the bass especially(I love soloy bass stuff).
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The piano/bass part is good, but it gets a little atonal at times, so it just sounds kinda, off. Drum part is good. Bass part is really good.

When the lead comes in, it just sounds kinda, cliche.

All in all, there's nothing really bad, but nothing really good.

6.5/10.

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