#1
if i were a woodchuck
and you were a whale
i’d put on fake fins
and tailor a tail

i’d leave my own kind
set out to sea
on a boat i would make
out of branches and leaves

i’d ask all the fish
if they’d heard your name
on some kind of current
on some kind of wave

and eventually
at a plankton cafe
i’d run in to you
at which point i’d say

i know
your face
you’re the one
i’ve seen in my dreams
this might
sound strange
but i think
we’re meant to be

you and me

if you lived on pluto
and i lived on mars
i’d look up in the sky
past all the stars

i’d espy your shine
and then set my sights
construct a spaceship
and gear up for flight

i’d take off with speed
and ground with grace
immediately look all
over the place

and eventually
at an ice-frozen lake
i’d run in to you
at which point i’d say

i know
your face
you’re the one
i’ve seen in my dreams
this might
sound strange
but i think
we’re meant to be

you and me


some of the rhymes are forced, meh

c4c
#2
uhh..
i'm making a film write now, and i need a cheesy love song to sing,
is it alright if i use that?
hahaha
what the hell does a signature do?
#3
if i were a woodchuck
and you were a whale
i’d put on fake fins
and tailor a tail

i’d leave my own kind
set out to sea
on a boat i would make
out of branches and leaves

i’d ask all the fish
if they’d heard your name
on some kind of current
on some kind of wave

and eventually
at a plankton cafe
i’d run in to you
at which point i’d say


^ i thought that was great for what it is. i mean nothing amazing but good none the less. the rest of it was as you said, pretty cheesy and whatever.
#4
You should probably never refer to a girl in a song as a "whale," no matter how cheesy or tongue-in-cheek the song is.
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So what? I wasted like 5 minutes watching DaddyTwoFoot's avatar.


Metalheads are the worst thing that ever happened to metal.
#6
Quote by DaddyTwoFoot
You should probably never refer to a girl in a song as a "whale," no matter how cheesy or tongue-in-cheek the song is.

hahhaha yeah actually, my girl friend asked me about it.