#1
I got so stunned when I saw you today
With a white collared shirt and skirt painted grey
Your sneakers have been stepped on countless times
And countless times have I dreamed dreams about you
So over my head God couldn't make them come true.

And it looks like you've just visited the barber
Came to me looking like a brown Korean mushroom
Well that's what you said, but have I told you I love mushrooms?
Goes well in soup or stew
As a garden plant, as a rain shelter too
In shady areas, in broods they bloom
Leeching and leeching, this memorial I've built for you.

I know its useless and I know I'm a fool
I've caught stars in a bucket and made plastic out of wool
You still don't love me but I'll always love you
So I'll keep molding this porcelain dump
Until he's perfect enough for you.
#2
this doesn't really grab me. i'm not entirely sure what its even about. is there a rhme scheme at all? cause theirs some rhymes but they just stop or aren't in the right place.
interesting about mushrooms though