#1
i have two mp3's on my profile
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/DKMfreak410/

one is of The Godfather Theme thing that Slash does but i did it my own way
the other is a blues improvising thingy

so please listen and rate and comment
My gear
Epiphone Les Paul Standard
B-52 LS100 Half Stack
Dunlop SW30 Slash Signature Wah
Digitech Hardwire CR-7 Stereo Chorus
Digitech Hardwire DL-8 Delay/Looper
Boss BD-2 Blues Driver
Fender CD220CE Acoustic
#3
The playing is pretty nice (better on the blues than the Godfather theme i think), what are you recording through?

The tone sounds very thin, Id double track and pan and then compress with a bit of a mid range eq hike.

In the blues improv the bass actually sits really nicely in the mix but id add a bit of reverb to the drums, they sound stale. Also the guitars, especially the lead guitar is far too quiet in the mix.

Its all just personal opinion remember, the playing sounded good but theres a couple of suggestions for quick ways to add a bit extra to the mix.