I know it's been a while since I came up with a new diddy. Now I have though, it is up in my profile for your listening pleasure. It's called "Thump Thump It's a bass only song for now. All I need to do is get a band to record with.

As always I will do C4C, and I won't do any of that B.S. like "that was nice". I'll tell you what I like and what, if anything, needs to be improved upon.
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I can totally imagian an awesome guitar track and drum track to go with this, pertty simple bass track, cept I cant figure out how you made the thumping sound with the bass. I can imagian the intro with a heavy guitar kinda thing, then the chours thing with a more lightened up guitar and the outro with like crushing guitar. Or you could go with a RHCP kinda style with it.

But idk, I'm not all that great at criting bass tracks, mainly cause I never really see them in the OR thread.

Thanks for the crit btw.
I'm sure there would be a million guitarists who would just at the chance to make a tune out of it. Theres a website called indabamusic.com where you can collaborate, its worth seeing if you can get some musicians. Its really good by itself, I think if a band were to use it you may have to uncomplicate it a bit, you could easilt make two or three tunes out of it!

Sounds nice and catchy. The tone is good, from the changes it sounds like you could make a couple of different songs from it instead of one. The tapping on the strings could be substituted for a bass drum and it would add a nice touch. You're right, it really needs a band haha. Nice riffs though.

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Since it's not a full song yet, I can't really say too much about the structure and whatnot, but i have to say that I love your tone. Nice and tight and controlled playing. Your slapping was great, but sometimes the note would ring out a bit after the slap. I know that once everything is put on top you wouldn't hear that, but i still think you could clean that up a bit more. All the licks were fine. Nothing terrible sounding. So overall it's a solid bass line for a short song. Nice job.

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Wow, the bass was perfect for the announcer voice in my head when I typed that.

This cool, but your timing is sorta all over the place. And here comes the slap bass. It's cool. I would be cool to hear this with drums and an electric piano. And then that riff, and that sounds like a rock n' roll riff! Back to the slap and...fin. I dug that, a few parts were boring as bass parts, though.
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