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Here's two I've written lately.

First one, Inner You, written for my girlfriend who was feeling down lately. Can you guess the inspiration?

Oh Clarissa,
can't you see the new day?
Put the past, let it fly
away.

Oh my love,
you know you're beautiful,
no matter what you may think
be cheerful.

You're perfect, to me
You may not think so, hey.
Just set yourself free
Embrace the inner you.

Oh frightened one,
don't you ever give up to soon,
and throw away everything
you could have.

Oh, what can I say,
Clarissa, dear, you're perfect.
Look out, see the new day,
Don't fill your heart with neglect.

You're perfect, to me
You may not think so, oh
Just set yourself free
Embrace the inner you.


Next one, Our World, is just a newly found feeling of peace for our world. Please let me know how you like it as well!

Take a poor boy from his home,
and feed him for one day.
Let him sit and marvel in
the world we have here today.

He'll tell you how he's never seen
so many lights and sounds,
And my friend, you can see,
the joy in his smile.

If we could all just give eachother,
that glimmer of hope and faith,
Believe in the world forever,
Believe in the world together.

Imagine feeding a dry land,
with grains of eternal nourishment.
Watching the people push past eachother,
Cheering with humble grace.

Try to make a difference in a land far way,
Leave all your troubles here,
Realize that yours may not be,
As difficult as your brothers.

If we could all just give eachother,
that glimmer of hope and faith,
Believe in the world forever,
Believe in the world together.

Take my hand and let us travel,
to the shore under the sun and sand,
Feel the waves against our feet,
And the love for our fellow man,
Our feelings for our equal blood,
Take a stand, take action,
Bring our world closer, forever.

If we could all just give eachother,
that glimmer of hope and faith,
Believe in the world forever,
Believe in the world together.


Thanks guys.
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