#1
Hi
I need help! ...because I need some really true opinions, and some advices because of the text (i'm from germany...and my english... idk, i also agree if you would say that it sounds like kindergarten english).
So I would really appreciate if you tell me your opinion and maybe say what sounds wrong.
sorry that i ask for that.
of course you can also just read it =).
and thanks!

so...here's the first one: miss the sun

Sittin' here in my class
listening to music,
don't hear what they're talking.

Wearin' my summer dress
getting goosebumps,
the sky is cloudy and grey.

(chorus)
And i miss the sun,
miss the heat, miss easy-going people.
I just wanna go outside, open the door
and feel the sun on my skin.
I hope it's coming back soon.

Watchin' the people
talking about something,
I wanna join a party not a conversation.

(chorus)
And i miss the sun,
miss the heat, miss easy-going people.
I just wanna go outside, open the door
and feel the sun on my skin.
I hope it's coming back soon.

Did you ever notice
that it's the sun
which lets us smile and survive?

(bridge)
Don't tell me to speak up.
Can't you understand?
I can't be myself when the sun's hiding.
Wanna look up and face the light.

(chorus)
And i miss the sun,
miss the heat, miss easy-going people.
I just wanna go outside, open the door
and feel the sun on my skin.
I hope it's coming back soon.



and now: everything is alright

The light from my cell phone is shining on the paper.
I try to write this down in silence
cause my roommates wanna sleep.
I feel fine lieing in the dark
hearing some quiet laughs on the floor.

It's raining outside and it couldn't be better.
I don't care about the weather
thinking of the day makes me glad.
I feel fine ending my day this way,
it seems to be a good way.

(chorus)
Do you know this feeling
when everything feels alright?
You're coming home late at night
and your day has been a good day.
Before driving home you've had fun with your friends.
You just want the night to continue
and wish to go back to the club.
You are so alive thinking 'I feel alright'.

First when I saw the city streets I wasn't that amazed.
Then some boys talked to me
and my self-confidence was rising.
I feel fine, walking up and down in London
I like it, even if I'm a bit lost.

(chorus)
Do you know this feeling
when everything feels alright?
You're coming home late at night
and your day has been a good day.
Before driving home you've had fun with your friends.
You just want the night to continue
and wish to go back to the club.
You are so alive thinking 'I feel alright'.

(bridge)
I want those emotions to last forever.
Could someone plese record this moment
so that I can replay it everytime I want?
...replay it everytime I want.

(chorus)
Do you know this feeling
when everything feels alright?
You're coming home late at night
and your day has been a good day.
Before driving home you've had fun with your friends.
You just want the night to continue
and wish to go back to the club.
You are so alive thinking 'I feel alright'.
Last edited by shelovesthesun at Sep 18, 2009,
#2
Read the rules, delete this; repost your thread correctly.
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

#3
Yep. Go check out the rules. Afterwards you can repost one of these lyrics. You can post the other lyrics tomorrow or any time after.

Thanks.