#1
Hey guys, just finished all the parts to my song 'Storms' obviously still needs drums and bass and I'm not 100% on the arrangement so any constructive criticism would be awesome, thanks guys!

C4C as always

It's Storms (Full) on my profile
#2
Very impressive stuff. Some of the guitars sounded a bit compressed but the overall tone was great. Can't wait to hear this fully produced! I can't really form a full opinion until I hear this with drums and bass because the entire dynamic of the song could change.

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#3
Has a bit of maiden in the bass line, or the bass part of the guitar. Sounds good overall but a bit too much reverb, the leads sound very far away.
#4
Quote by ShredFast
Has a bit of maiden in the bass line, or the bass part of the guitar. Sounds good overall but a bit too much reverb, the leads sound very far away.


thanks man, I've had that complaint a bit actually it seems I love 2 things: reverb and pinch harmonics. I'll go for a more raw sound on the next itteration.
#5
im diggin the hell out of the intro. its nice , peaceful and spacey.im really liking the lead work but the reverb is a bit to much.you could possibly do something a little more with the rythm work.i would also like to hear it with drums and bass. this soung definatley has the potential to be a great instumental.

crit mine if you want

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1201074
#6
Yea, a lot of reverb there. You are definently a maiden fan...and I don't know what to say. I dug it...C4C?https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1202906
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