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Here's a song I wrote, and I just want to make sure it all fits right. If there's something you think I should add or change let me know. I've got a version of it posted on my MP3's as well if you'd like to listen to how it all together. Also if you think there's a better title for it that'd be nice. I couldn't think of a better one at the time, but I don't think this one works right. Thanks,

Jordan


Verse 1-

Passing through and I miss you,
Wondering how long it's been,
This day should grow darker now,
Cause the memories are better in my head,

This place has lost it's meaning,
Well maybe only to me,
This bench it grows cold,
Without you sitting here next to me,

Chorus-

And whose gonna sit and listen to all your dreams,
And whose gonna sit,
Well I was hopin' it'd be me,
Cause I think I love you,
And you know that I care,
But it hurts me just to see you go,
To have you leave my side,
To see you go,
Cause life is moving on,
And whether I like it or not,
You're passing through my arms.

Verse 2-

The people of now are fading to the past,
Oh they just slip through my grasp,
Come, let me hold you,
(Pause)
Well I know you were here before.

Chorus2-

And whose gonna sit and listen to all your dreams,
And whose gonna sit,
Well I was hopin' it'd be me,
Cause I know I love you,
And you know that I care,
But it hurts me just to see you go,
To have you leave my side,
To see you go,
Cause life is moving on,
And whether I like it or not,
You're passing through my arms.

Closing-

Listen, everything stands still,
Wait, it hurts me just to see you go,
To have you leave my side,
Cause life is moving on,
And whether I like it or not,
You're passing through my arms.