Sounds bad ass. It starts of peacefully and then form 17 to 22 bar the solo sounds awesome and the rhythm part is good. It reminds me of an old song but i can't remember it now. If you can add some more heaviness after bar 23 it shall sound great then repeat some sections make a mix of the hole thing by some brake down, pre-solo thing & the big solo awaits.
I'm likin it
I did think the bass was a little bit distracting in the beginning, and the chord at 0:37 was a little rough. The drums match the song nicely but I like the ride in the breakdown much more than I did the crash. And maybe a few notes before the breakdown starts to act as a transition? Or maybe a measure of bass solo or a bass drop. Otherwise the song flows very well and reminds me a lot of silverstein. Good stuff

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