#2
I remember this I'm very glad you carried on working on this because it is awesome! There is literally nothing i would change riff wise but the bridge was a bit short for me, maybe repeat it, and i think you should carry those final chorus vocals right until bar 70 to give the epic ending feel which i think you were going for.

Great job sir!
Last edited by 21Fretter at Sep 20, 2009,
#5
If I could offer some critique sir, make the piano parts more chordal and not so 5thy. It brings out a lot more in terms of tonality.
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