#1
been tripping on the branches
beating bashing dirt
on a flourished forest floor
taking me out as a hike
up through the narrowed path
pushed to a clear from previous passer by's
tumble as i do
tossing and turning back to the base
soil covered face
silent where i lay
until some day
when another man will try
hopefully not alone like i
so there will be another to call for help
when my pride loses its step.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#2
I'm trying to twig things together here. So, you've got pride being compared to the hardness and studdorness of nature. It trips you up as you progress through the "forest of life". It makes you lonely.

Am I right?
#3
yes. to proud to have anyone with you, then realize others are essential to your survival. not only the survival of you, but the survival of our genes and dna. the reason why we all look for someone special.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror