feedback good or bad please
sounds like a dodgy ringtone...
Pretty amusing to say the least. I could easily see some synths/poly synths thrown into this mix to make it a bit more interesting instrumentally. The riffs are pretty solid. I'm not really big into this "hardcore" dissonance thing, but to each their own. You had a lot of unique riffs and chord structures. Pretty entertaining. Greats drums too.
I enjoyed it but there was bit too much ringing out on some notes which turned some parts into an overwhelming mix of noise but if you refine it a tiny bit in that aspect i think you have a solid song.